Saturday, August 20, 2011

PILOT - Chapter One

It was raining when Emily went to work, on that Wednesday, in December. It was near to Christmas and she didn’t have bought some presents to her close friends. She was a successful woman in her job but not a successful woman in her love life. She is a kindergarten teacher because she always has loved children. But, although she wants children of her own, she didn’t have found the perfect guy.


But what she didn’t know is that on that Wednesday, in December, in the middle of the rain, she will find that guy. A tall man with dark hair and blue eyes. At first she didn’t notice him, but then when she accidentally crashed on him, she knew that he would be hers one day. Wait, she crashed on him, because she fell off the train. Now that is explained, we can tell what happens next. She said him she was sorry for being such a distracted girl, and he, with the most incredible smile said “It’s okay. I’m a little bit distracted too.” And from that moment she knew that she was in love. It’s stupid because no one should fall in love in the train! She knew that was an impossible love, because she didn’t even know his name. She kept thinking about him all day long, and making some (stupid) plans in her mind. And then when she was walking home, she thought that she saw him, and she turned back, and there he is. All wet (because the rain didn’t have stop all day), and with a sad face. She run in his direction and ask him “What’s wrong?” and he said “Nothing…”. She took his arm and took him to his house. Yeah, she knew that is a silly thing to do, because after all she didn’t knew what he was, and maybe he was a dangerous guy, but her heart tell her to do that.

She gave him a towel and asked him if he was hungry, he said “No, thank you. And thank you for doing this.” She sat right next to him and said “You don’t have to thank me. I liked you from the first time I saw you. But what is wrong? Please tell me…” He started to cry and told her that he lost his parents on the night before on that exactly spot where she found him. She tried to comfort him and at midnight they both fall asleep.


What do you think will happens next ???

2 comments:

  1. Love it! What a perfect way to start =)

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  2. Olá querida =)

    Ainda bem que gostaste do blog e sê bem-vinda!!

    Tens mesmo que me mostrar esse verniz! Eu ontem comprei um da cliché tão lindo, mal tenha tempo ponho no blog! Só vou terminar o raio da tese e volto logo logo!

    Prometo que vou ler a tua história até porque vou trabalhar para os EUA e vai-me ajudar a treinar o meu inglês ;)

    Beijocas*

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